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Brilliant. ^_^ Cheers, Emilia!

Ah. The sun/time zone makes sense. Cheers!

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Oy, this is lovely. There's something effervescent about it, and your formatting gives it a jigging aspect, like a child skipping or the stair step play on piano keys. I ...

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Hullo! I bloody love that you paint your town with metaphors and images. Very Emily Dickinson; feels like the truth slant, and slant truths often do us the favor of ...

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Ahoy! Out of curiosity, how did you feel as you wrote this? Waiting for a new idea to come, so I can be done, and walk outside to sit in ...

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There's a lot in this that strikes archetypal chords. It raises questions; but at the same time, it seems like it's still feeling out what questions it wants to raise. ...

Oy, I very much agree that it is threadbare, even while I think there's a certain amount of brevity that gives it its voice. How do you think it could ...

Run-Through--[At a Runner's Sprint Pace] Oy, detail at the beginning was apt. I immediately got a tangible sense of both the mother's and daughter's character--and by that, a sense of ...

'Lo CL--I can't believe I haven't thanked you for this yet. ^_^ Anyhow, thanks very much... And perhaps I'll have another few installments by Christmas Break. Oy, I would much ...

Very briefly-- I rather like what you have, if I push myself to read past all the idea , the [i]theme[/] of it. But it's rather difficult to see past ...

Hullo again Wooster... Hopping to chapters two, mostly three. ...I'm afraid I was off, last critique. I hope it was helpful all the same, and not meandering or distracted. o0 ...

Hello again. And you begin with characters you've already developed. Yet, dashing forward into the future, you've dropped something, I think. In both the prose and the characterisation, it skips--like